segunda-feira, 3 de outubro de 2011

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5 comentários:

  1. Lindo demais! Você não escreve vazia, escreve cheia de sonho que flui, repleto de poesia!!!

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  2. Legal o poema,
    tema bem trabalhado, a forma ficou imaginativa.
    Gostei!

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  3. Gosto muito das "formas" das tuas linhas.

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  4. Ensina eu a fazer isso... na verdade já fiz textos assim, mas ando sem prática... e preguiçoso...

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  5. O tema está bem desenvolvido, a arquitetura do poema é que me deixa um pouco intrigado.
    Mesmo assim parabéns, você sabe fazer bem...
    beijos

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